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Short Story Competition: 'Roll Call’
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Gibraltar Chronicle
It crept through my clothes and into my bones, making it impossible to ignore the miserable place I was in.
But the boy couldn’t.
Roll call continued.
The repetition of routines, such as roll call, highlights the bleak monotony of existence, while moments like the boy’s collapse introduce a sudden, gripping tension.
The atmosphere is unrelentingly bleak, and the lingering sense of helplessness remains with the reader long after the story ends.